This is the angsty, bitter one I thought nobody was going to read, LOL, but I actually received a really nice review at fanfiction.net just this afternoon.
Title: Lay Down My Heart
Word Count: 3,721
Pairings: Kosagi/Karasu, past La'Cryma!Haruka/Karasu
Characters: Kosagi, Karasu, Tobi, Atori, Kuina, Isuka, Fukurou
Genre: drama, angst, unrequited love
Summary: His eyes are shards of blood-red glass -- sharp, cold, inert.
Thanks to thecert/certs_up for the beta and moral support!